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Snappy writing works best online

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Short snappy writing works best online.

First, people are less ready to read long pieces online than short articles.

Second, people read online material about 25 percent slower than print. Jakob Nielsen explains why in In defence of print. Nielsen wrote his article in 1996, but things haven't changed.

Third,  people get distracted easily online. There are advertisements and links to other web sites as well as bleeping notification of incoming emails, tweets and instant messages.

If you write a brief article there's a more chance readers will get to the end before skipping off elsewhere.

Fourth, skilled writers aim for brevity because good, vigourous English is concise.

A writer's goal is to get messages to readers as swiftly and as accurately as possible.

Get on. Say what you need to say. Get off.

Leave the fancy, flowery stuff to poets and fiction writers.

Written by Bill Bennett

June 18th, 2009 at 6:02 pm

5 Responses to 'Snappy writing works best online'

  1. I love the implications: fiction and poetry authors are fancy and flowery (false), therefore they’re unskilled (also false). All it says is, you don’t know much poetry at all.

    Leonardo Boiko

    19 Jun 09 at 4:36 am

  2. Leonardo

    I’m not suggesting poets or fiction writers are unskilled – some are, some aren’t. However, their goals and motivations are different.

    For most people writing is a means to an end. For poets and fiction writers, writing is the end.

    billbennettnz

    19 Jun 09 at 8:14 am

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